I really like be a netball player for the Primary.
I play netball for Panmure Bridge School Year 5 & 6
Monday, December 23, 2019
Story / Summer Learning Journey / Day 3 / Task 2
This week for Summer Learning Journey We had to make a story about something My Story was about my wish. My Wish is to be a Netball Player. I told my readers what time we train how man genders and other stuff.
I really like be a netball player for the Primary.
I play netball for Panmure Bridge School Year 5 & 6
I really like be a netball player for the Primary.
I play netball for Panmure Bridge School Year 5 & 6
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Kia ora Liletina! How are you doing today? Olive here from the Summer Learning Journey!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your blog post! I really enjoyed reading your narrative about your wish! You sound like you've put a lot of effort into your story. Ka pai! I think it's fantastic that you want to become a Silver Fern! Being in the Silver Fern team is something to enjoy, work hard at, and be really proud of!I hope you get there one day, you sound like you'd be a great player!
Remember the end of the Summer Learning Journey is next Friday 24th January! Keep up the blogging, commenting and enthusiasm!
Ngā mihi,
Olive
Hi Liletina!
ReplyDeleteThis activity you did was great, Great job for staying active with the Summer Learning Journey! What was the hardest part of this activity?
Blog you later!
~ Florence
Hello Liletina! I like how you've made your story connected to you, and I can see being a Netball player is your personal dream. And I think it would make a GREAT book, especially as something inspiring even little kids who had the same dream as you can read. Which leads me to ask, who would be your target audience? Good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Liletina,
ReplyDeleteIt's great that you want to become a netball player when you grow up. I think that if you are able to train and work hard enough you will be able to to achieve your dream and become a Silver Fern player. Keep up the excellent work!