I learned from this task was how to write poem about stepping on
Tuesday, December 17, 2019
Peom / Summer Learning Journey / Day 2 / Task 2 /
This week for summer learning Journey we had to write a poem about what we would say if it the first step on the moon. I made a Rhyme poem. I have a lot of rhymes on my poem. I hope you like it
I learned from this task was how to write poem about stepping on
I learned from this task was how to write poem about stepping on
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Hi Liletina, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about stepping on the moon - would you REALLY like to step on the moon? Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHey Heather Collins Thanks for commenting on my work. I would really like to step on the moon with me and my family and others.
DeleteHello Liletina! This is a really creative poem, and unlike me you've made yours rhyme! My favorite part would be the last line - "The trip to the moon was fun, but on the way back the space rocket spun." It creates a really cool picture in my head, and it's definitely makes an interesting twist on the whole poem...Superb work!
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ReplyDeleteYour poem about going on the moon is great. I would also love to go on the moon because it is something that not many people get to experience. If you could take only one person with you to the moon who would you take? Keep up the good work.