Today I went on to the summer learning journey website and there was are blog post about the beast and I wanted to do an D.L.O about it so then On the summer learning website there said to find interesting words and describe you beast and I wrote it on my D.L.O so when I grow I might want are beast.
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ReplyDeleteHi Liletina! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I love your post about your beast. I think that the way that you have drawn it yourself is really cool. How long did it take for you to think of the beast? To make this post better, I think you should describe it more fully with the colors, maybe personality and actions it does, how it moves. I also think that you should work on the drawing a little bit more so it looks like it has been described.
Great work!
Mia
Malo e Lelei Liletina
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the drawing that you made of your beast. My favourite part is that hat. I thought that it was a very funny, very cool addition.
The list that you included for alternative words to use instead of beasts is great. What a good idea. Not all creatures like this are ‘beasts’. I think creature is my favourite of all the words.
I would love to read more descriptions of your beast. What sound does it make? Does it smell bad? It’s bright blue eyes look think they can see in the dark.
I look forward to reading even more about your beast.
Thanks heaps,
Izzy
Hello Beast! I like you're creative beast, it looks great. I like how you listed the parts of it and said how you will decorate your beast two. I think you're beast sounds very funky and fun. Keep it up!
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