I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
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Thursday, April 16, 2020
Commenting on people's blogs
Afatia and I worked together online and decided to comment on people's blogs. Commenting on people's blogs was really fun and enjoying to do. We both learnt new interesting facts and information on these blogs. I also learned how to give feedback to the person you're commenting to so they know what to do and not do on their next blog post.
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Friday, November 1, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on somebody work and give them feedback.
I really like reading Juel Blog post about Rohal Dial.I learn new facts and new information about Rohal Dahl.
I really like reading Juel Blog post about Rohal Dial.I learn new facts and new information about Rohal Dahl.
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commenting
Thursday, September 26, 2019
Commenting/Taua
L.I To comment on somebody blog post and give them some feedback.
Today I have commented on Taua blog post.His blog was about selling are PS4 to Mr Wong and convincing him to sell Mr Wong his PS4 .
I gave him some great feedback as example I gave him some feedback about how he hooked my attention.
He is a link so you can comment-Taua Blog
Today I have commented on Taua blog post.His blog was about selling are PS4 to Mr Wong and convincing him to sell Mr Wong his PS4 .
I gave him some great feedback as example I gave him some feedback about how he hooked my attention.
He is a link so you can comment-Taua Blog
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Friday, August 16, 2019
Commenting/Zepplin
L.I To comment on somebody blog.
I commented on Zepplin blog post his blog post is about area and perimeter. I really liked how he had used his addition and his timetables but I wanted him to write more in his blurb like how he learned what he did.
Here is a link to his blog to see what he been learning-Zepplin Blog
I commented on Zepplin blog post his blog post is about area and perimeter. I really liked how he had used his addition and his timetables but I wanted him to write more in his blurb like how he learned what he did.
Here is a link to his blog to see what he been learning-Zepplin Blog
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Zepplin Blog post
Friday, August 9, 2019
Commenting/Andrew
L.I To comment on somebody blog.
This week I decide to comment on Andrew blog his blog is about SSR Selfie. I wanted him to write more information about how he learned and what did he learned. I really liked how he gave interspersing facts about the book.
Here is a link to his blog so you can comment on his as well-Andrew Blog
This week I decide to comment on Andrew blog his blog is about SSR Selfie. I wanted him to write more information about how he learned and what did he learned. I really liked how he gave interspersing facts about the book.
Here is a link to his blog so you can comment on his as well-Andrew Blog
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Friday, August 2, 2019
Commenting/Afatia Blog
L.I To comment on someone blog.
This week I deiced to comment on Afatia Blog her blog post is about her commenting on Jay-Lee blog about her maths I have asked her if she could give the readers more deatil as example like what you learned and how you learned.
Here is a link so you can comment as well-Afatia Blog
I learned by commenting on Afatia blog.
How I learned by telling Afatia what she need to fix when she comments on somebody else blog.
This week I deiced to comment on Afatia Blog her blog post is about her commenting on Jay-Lee blog about her maths I have asked her if she could give the readers more deatil as example like what you learned and how you learned.
Here is a link so you can comment as well-Afatia Blog
I learned by commenting on Afatia blog.
How I learned by telling Afatia what she need to fix when she comments on somebody else blog.
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Afatia Blog,
commenting
Thursday, July 25, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on somebody blog post.
This week I deiced to comment on Farazana blog post her blog post is about her commenting on Elaario blog. I like how she asked if it was entersting make the D.L.O . Here is a link to her blog post so you could comment on her as well.
Farazana Blog Post
Here is a photo.
This week I deiced to comment on Farazana blog post her blog post is about her commenting on Elaario blog. I like how she asked if it was entersting make the D.L.O . Here is a link to her blog post so you could comment on her as well.
Farazana Blog Post
Here is a photo.
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Farazana Blog
Thursday, July 4, 2019
Commenting/Afatia Blog
L.I To comment on someone blog.
This week I comment on Afatia blog. Her blog post was about her SSR Selfie. She need to write more details like how she learned . Here is a link to her blog so you can comment on her blog as well.
Link-Afatia Blog
Here is photo
This week I comment on Afatia blog. Her blog post was about her SSR Selfie. She need to write more details like how she learned . Here is a link to her blog so you can comment on her blog as well.
Link-Afatia Blog
Here is photo
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commenting
Friday, June 28, 2019
Commenting/Alayah Blog
L.I To comment on somebody blog.
I have comment on Alayah blog about her kiwi cam. I have learned what she was learning in kiwi. She had only one little problem she did not tell the readers what The Topic means and what the theme means.
Here is a photo(To show you proof)
I have comment on Alayah blog about her kiwi cam. I have learned what she was learning in kiwi. She had only one little problem she did not tell the readers what The Topic means and what the theme means.
Here is a photo(To show you proof)
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Alayah Blog,
commenting
Friday, June 21, 2019
Commenting/Chirs
L.I To comment on somebody blog
This week I have Comment on Chirs is blog post I have comment about his writing. I did not know Dialogue means until when I read thorough his blurb I get to understand what Dialogue means it means . Dialogue is a conversation between two or more people in a movie, book, play and more
Here is a Link to Chirs is blog so you can comment on Chirs blog -Chirs Blog
Here is a photo(To show you proof)
This week I have Comment on Chirs is blog post I have comment about his writing. I did not know Dialogue means until when I read thorough his blurb I get to understand what Dialogue means it means . Dialogue is a conversation between two or more people in a movie, book, play and more
Here is a Link to Chirs is blog so you can comment on Chirs blog -Chirs Blog
Here is a photo(To show you proof)
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Friday, June 14, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on people blog post.
Today I have comment on Suila blog her blog post was about her commenting on Te Raumati blog post about the Maori seasons. I also like the way she have asked her a question.
Here is a photo of my comment( To show you proof)
Today I have comment on Suila blog her blog post was about her commenting on Te Raumati blog post about the Maori seasons. I also like the way she have asked her a question.
Here is a photo of my comment( To show you proof)
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Suila blog
Friday, June 7, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on somebody blog.
Today I have commuted on Salina blog because she a new person from this school also she made a procedural about how to make a cake. I really love her poster and her slide here is a link to her blog so you can comment on her blog.
Link-Blog
Today I have commuted on Salina blog because she a new person from this school also she made a procedural about how to make a cake. I really love her poster and her slide here is a link to her blog so you can comment on her blog.
Link-Blog
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Salina
Friday, May 31, 2019
Commenting/Bella H Blog post
L.I To comment on somebody blog.
Today I have comment on Bella H blog her blog was about kiwi sport I really like the way how she has told the reader what her relfiction is. Here is photo of my comment to show you proof Here is a link to her blog- Bella H Blog
Today I have comment on Bella H blog her blog was about kiwi sport I really like the way how she has told the reader what her relfiction is. Here is photo of my comment to show you proof Here is a link to her blog- Bella H Blog
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Friday, May 24, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on someone blog.
I comment on Suila blog. Her blog is about her inquiry.Why I commuted on her because I really like how she explained the martial that she used for her Inquiry.
Here is a link to her blog -Suila Blog Post
here is a photo to show you proof that I have commuted on Suila blog.
I comment on Suila blog. Her blog is about her inquiry.Why I commuted on her because I really like how she explained the martial that she used for her Inquiry.
Here is a link to her blog -Suila Blog Post
here is a photo to show you proof that I have commuted on Suila blog.
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Suila blog
Friday, May 3, 2019
Comment
L.I To comment on someone blog post.
Today I comment on Mote blog post Because he has been blog a lot his week.I comment on his writing about his procedural.here is a photo of my comment to show you proof.
Today I comment on Mote blog post Because he has been blog a lot his week.I comment on his writing about his procedural.here is a photo of my comment to show you proof.
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Mote Blog post
Thursday, April 11, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on someone blog post.
Today I comment on Ong blog I comment on his writing he was learning how to make simple sentience into longer sentience.And he took a photo.Here is a link to his blog post so you can blog on it as well .Ong blog Here is a image of my comment.
Today I comment on Ong blog I comment on his writing he was learning how to make simple sentience into longer sentience.And he took a photo.Here is a link to his blog post so you can blog on it as well .Ong blog Here is a image of my comment.
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Thursday, April 4, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on Someone blog.
Today I commented on Taua blog about him and his group. I comment on his inquiry because I get to know and learn what the words meaning is because on his blurb he wrote about the meaning of the 4 words tat he learned.
Today I commented on Taua blog about him and his group. I comment on his inquiry because I get to know and learn what the words meaning is because on his blurb he wrote about the meaning of the 4 words tat he learned.
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Friday, March 29, 2019
Commenting
L.I To write a comment on someone blog post.
I picked chisa because she has written a blog post about what had happen when the smokefree came in mt wellington and she had to write about. The only question I put was what did she learn?
I picked chisa because she has written a blog post about what had happen when the smokefree came in mt wellington and she had to write about. The only question I put was what did she learn?
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Friday, March 15, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on someone post.
Today I commented on charlize blog post about reading she wrote down her feeling when she was making the DLO. I also put a question for her to answer and the question is about her learning.
Today I commented on charlize blog post about reading she wrote down her feeling when she was making the DLO. I also put a question for her to answer and the question is about her learning.
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Friday, March 8, 2019
Commenting
L.I To comment on afatia blog post.
I picked afatia blog cause she made a blog post about the golden ranger and she wrote on her blog post about what is power rangers and how she talked about that the golden ranger is her group name.
The question I asked what What she learned.
I picked afatia blog cause she made a blog post about the golden ranger and she wrote on her blog post about what is power rangers and how she talked about that the golden ranger is her group name.
The question I asked what What she learned.
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