LI: To explain in fewer words what the text is about.
This DLO above was worked collabortivtly with me and my partner, we both read an article that understands about someones passion & they talent. This DLO we used to find 20 important words and mad it to 6 words, after that we created we a paragrah explainging the topic that we're writing about. We both used our searching skills to find words that helps explain the topic and makes it more intersting and deatiled.As example Rangi Haira Jaxon Greening, He is an Male Maori that has a lot of amazing art work with customising sneakers.
Hi Liletina
ReplyDeleteWell Done using your smart searching skills to find more interesting words to make your paragraph more detailed. Rangi Haira Jaxon Greening has combined his passion, culture and artistic ability to create something really cool and I'm sure has inspired many others to achieve their goals.
Good work