Today I commented on Afatia blog about her swimming I gave her some feedback what she needs write in a blurb. My feedback I gave her was to not write we learned the swimming skills from the past few weeks I gave her feedback that she need to write what she did at the swimming pools because what if the reader did not read the other blog post about your swimming.
Here is a link to Afatia blog post so you can comment on her blog and give her some feedback-Afatia Blog Post
Three questions
1-How did you learn?
2-What tools did you use in the pool.
3-Was it fun at the pools.
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