This week for summer learning journey we had to write an review about the the Royal family.
Here is my review!
The royal family costume are really good I think there should put more on to hook the looker into there dancing! I also think that there dance s really good I think you guys need to improve more with sneaking out because people might think you running out because there something wrong! I think you should bend down more so the lookers won't find out that you guys are running away!.
Hi Liletina! I think they have an amazing style and way of dancing, preforming, and dressing. The royal family are stunning! Please include a little more information on what you had to do for the activity, it's quite confusing for those who don't know about the royal family. Otherwise good job!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Liletina,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Megan Lafferty and I am part of the Summer Learning Journey team who are working with the tamariki in the Ako Hiko cluster. Jordan shared with the team that you are the first student in Manaiakalani to finish the entire Summer Learning Journey programme. Congratulations! This is an incredible achievement, Liletina. You must be so proud of yourself, I know Jordan will be proud of you.
Aren't the Royal Family talented? I think you are right though, I got distracted from the performance when I saw the dancers running out the back. Sneaking out would be great advice. Maybe their costumes could be black on the back and they could sidestep out without us seeing. What do you think?
What I love about the Royal Family is that they are so in sync with each other. They must spend hours in the dance studio perfecting their routine. Do you think you would like to be part of the Royal Family one day?
Once again, well done on your amazing achievement, Liletina.
Kindest regards,
Megan :)
Hello Liletina!,
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed reading about your review of the Royal Family performance. In my opinion I think that the Royal Family dance was fantastic and I really liked their costumes, performance and their music. I agree with Megan, I also think that the Royal Family are in sync with each other.
Nice Work!
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ReplyDeleteHi Liletina,
ReplyDeleteI think that you have done a great job giving your opinion on the Royal Family dance show. I also think that it was a pretty good performance but a couple of things could be improved. Did you like anything else about their performance? Keep up the awesome work.